Comments for My Isle of Insanity http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com "The place were my Id, Ego and Anima all come together to exchange cookie recipes." - Maynard James Keenan Fri, 29 Aug 2008 01:50:40 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Walden Journal 9/21 by spiritwealth http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/21/walden-journal-921/#comment-16 spiritwealth Fri, 29 Aug 2008 01:50:40 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/21/walden-journal-921/#comment-16 I tend to agree. If I had a choice to do it over, I would not buy a house now, and I'm even wondering whether education is worth the debt too. I tend to agree. If I had a choice to do it over, I would not buy a house now, and I’m even wondering whether education is worth the debt too.

]]> Comment on Caged Bird Journal Week of 11/12 by askmueller25c http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/11/15/caged-bird-journal-week-of-1112/#comment-7 askmueller25c Mon, 19 Nov 2007 23:44:47 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/11/15/caged-bird-journal-week-of-1112/#comment-7 Good contemporary/historical connection. Talk a bit about Angelou's specific language choices. B+ Good contemporary/historical connection. Talk a bit about Angelou’s specific language choices.

B+

]]> Comment on Journal for week of 10/12 by askmueller25c http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/10/14/journal-for-week-of-1008/#comment-6 askmueller25c Tue, 13 Nov 2007 22:17:22 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/10/14/journal-for-week-of-1008/#comment-6 Good example. B+ Talk more about the text itself. Good example.

B+

Talk more about the text itself.

]]> Comment on Walden Journal 10/05 by askmueller25c http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/10/05/walden-journal-1005/#comment-5 askmueller25c Tue, 13 Nov 2007 22:16:08 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/10/28/walden-journal-1005/#comment-5 How do you think you get to be a pessimist? Just because you know today what you want, doesn't mean you'll know the same thing a few years from now. You might, but you might not. Living can change things. B+ Say more How do you think you get to be a pessimist?

Just because you know today what you want, doesn’t mean you’ll know the same thing a few years from now. You might, but you might not. Living can change things.

B+

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]]> Comment on Walden Journal 09/28 by askmueller25c http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/30/walden-journal-1/#comment-4 askmueller25c Tue, 13 Nov 2007 22:13:05 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/30/walden-journal-1/#comment-4 Another good choice. I'm sensing a theme in your selections. A- Another good choice. I’m sensing a theme in your selections.

A-

]]> Comment on Walden Journal 9/21 by askmueller25c http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/21/walden-journal-921/#comment-3 askmueller25c Tue, 13 Nov 2007 22:12:02 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/21/walden-journal-921/#comment-3 Good choice. Thoreau touches on a lot of issues that still impact us today. A- I never have felt the need to own a house, though I can see the appeal it has for others. Good choice. Thoreau touches on a lot of issues that still impact us today.

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I never have felt the need to own a house, though I can see the appeal it has for others.

]]> Comment on Self Reliance Journal by Mueller http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/14/self-reliance-journal/#comment-2 Mueller Thu, 27 Sep 2007 03:34:17 +0000 http://tjkiefer.wordpress.com/2007/09/14/self-reliance-journal/#comment-2 I like what you make of these quotes. I like that you use several snippets of text. You could strengthen this by perhaps writing on one over-arching topic and working the quotes in to support what you say about that. Come up with some sort of thesis that could connect all the quotes you pick. What do they have in common? I like what you make of these quotes. I like that you use several snippets of text. You could strengthen this by perhaps writing on one over-arching topic and working the quotes in to support what you say about that. Come up with some sort of thesis that could connect all the quotes you pick. What do they have in common?

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